Image (C) Kent Bonham

Image (C) Kent Bonham

Amongst a sea of people, there was no missing her.

Even with a million faces, she stood out. A bob of golden wavy hair, that flew all around her face with every step she took.

The more she waved it in place, the more it flew. The deep-sea blue eyes glowing in her face, her laughter, coming in all the way from her belly reverberating through the din of all the chitter chatter all around. If there were fairies, she was one.

I see her every day. And my heart stops a beat.

And starts. Everyday.

All the way.

The other version of the same image: Fearful Nights.

Part of Friday Fictioneers. On the spur writing takes this to new levels.
100 Words or less Short story.
More stories on the Friday Fiction, Jun 26 edition, click link. Hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields.
Word Count: 100words


About asarpota

Like to fly, but at the same time, quite on the ground, and do tend to be realistic. Very passionate about what I believe in and do, no patience with idiots, not a perfectionist, but trying to come close to it.... Not a nerd btw, value my friends very much, can criticize and have the b***s to take it on my chin. A spade is a spade!!!
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13 Responses to Heartbeats.

  1. micklively says:

    I like the pace of it: good piece.


  2. gahlearner says:

    The narrator’s admiration and love for the woman is tangible. Great story.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Only a lovers description, beautifully written!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Vinay Leo R. says:

    Ah. Lovestruck 😀 Good luck.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. I do believe you are infatuated the blonde hair beauty! Nice one.

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  6. Nan Falkner says:

    Very nice story! Nan

    Liked by 1 person

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